For the go world video I thought of things I could do. I first thought of doing a video about me moving here to Texas and talking about how I felt , but then I thought it would just be easier for me to do something that occurred recently so that I would have more of a connection. I wanted my story to have more of a punch and more emotion so that the observers could feel something when watching my video. Thinking about how I wanted to write it was difficult because I knew what I wanted to say, I just didn't know how I was going to set it up. At first I was going to start from the very beginning from when I first got my guinea pig but I didn't want my story to be too long so I just wrote mine in a that was then and this is now way. In a cause and effect way. I wrote a total of five drafts.
I changed a few words around to make it sound better. I asked a couple of people to read mine and the feedback I got mostly was that I needed to improve my vocabulary. I needed to have more words that would create an emotional punch. Creating my video I went to Animoto and got pictures off of my iPad after I linked my phone's pictures to it. Then I put my pictures in order of how I wanted them to show up in the video and then I choose the type of music I wanted. Putting the words on there was kind of a challenge because they all wouldn't fit on the slide. Because of that I had to chop it up a bit. Doing this project made me a little sad, talking about my guinea pig because I had her for a long time. Since I was in the sixth grade. She meant a lot to me and I got a little tearing and almost didn't do the project on it but I thought what else could I create a video about. When my video was revealed I was alittle sad. Memories came to me as I watched slide after slide of my guinea pig. It made me realize that she lived a good life. It made me sad but at the same time happy because I thought back to the little things she would do like when I would hold her in my lap she would move around to get comfortable and that lit a small candle inside me.
http://animoto.com/play/7De0o0XGKQg3pPwzGJnbEw
You have some good thinking here about your process. Doing this each time you write will help you to keep improving. Writers make purposeful choices. Remember to think about those choices as you write. What devices and words will you use to construct meaning? 4
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